Wednesday, October 20, 2010

Janine Trudell

Forever Halloween:

Doorbell chimes, hoodlums rhyme
“trick'r treat” voices raspy.

Eyes glow red, breath of death
flash of black sharp fangs connect.

Hot blood trickles down my neck
ageless souls chase immortal echoes.

7 comments:

  1. Wow! Such a powerful little piece. Great job! Would love to see more of you! :)

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  2. Yeah, that's why we have a security door. And our friends Smith & Wesson. And Doc Glock.

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  3. I love it, especially the "raspy voice" and the "souls chasing immortal echoes."

    Great job!

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  4. Good use of words. Short, but powerful.

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  5. Great Halloween poem! Concise and concrete--best kind. Very scary.

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  6. CONGRATULATIONS JANINE!!! I am so proud of you. Keep shining. :)

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