Forever Halloween:
Doorbell chimes, hoodlums rhyme
“trick'r treat” voices raspy.
Eyes glow red, breath of death
flash of black sharp fangs connect.
Hot blood trickles down my neck
ageless souls chase immortal echoes.
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Very catchy.
ReplyDeleteWow! Such a powerful little piece. Great job! Would love to see more of you! :)
ReplyDeleteYeah, that's why we have a security door. And our friends Smith & Wesson. And Doc Glock.
ReplyDeleteI love it, especially the "raspy voice" and the "souls chasing immortal echoes."
ReplyDeleteGreat job!
Good use of words. Short, but powerful.
ReplyDeleteGreat Halloween poem! Concise and concrete--best kind. Very scary.
ReplyDeleteCONGRATULATIONS JANINE!!! I am so proud of you. Keep shining. :)
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